The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Somehow I'm thinking of a fairy circle! What a darling memory you capture here, I can see it all playing out in my head and especially the little spot in the woods. Nicely done. ^_^
07/19/08
I love it! I can picture the place and have found God's peace in one just like it.
I loved it. Really beautiful :)
07/21/08
Hello Vince, I absolutely love this poem, especially the 5th stanza. It is beautiful! How true that one word can trigger a long forgotten memory. Sometimes a smell can do it for me. Well done. Linda
07/21/08
Very nicely done and right on topic for sure ~
It is not always easy to use rhyming poetry while describing such a specific place without being trite at times. You did a beautiful job with your word choices and evoked a lovely word picture for me. Thanks