The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Interesting story, given the angle you are writing from. The ending doesn't sound like it is a dream. The writer is home. I like the part when the main character says 'Thank you for sharing your faith with me ...', it speaks so much within those few words how the author make it to home.
06/12/08
Wonderful writing! The way you described each family memeber, I was glad too, that they were in heaven and way from the disease and pain. I love this-it is amazing! The ending was my favorite, well done! ^_^