The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Oooh! I love the title and how it fits in, especially the touches of culture in the names and the story as I read. I loved it, nicely done! ^_^
06/14/08
Title caught my eye and I just couldn't stop reading until I they were reunited. I like how you alternated between memories and the building anticipation.
06/17/08
You've captured the feelings of families separated for many years due to immigration issues. It's obvious you're familiar with the Karen people and their struggle for freedom and their dream to live normal lives. Good writing!