The Official Writing Challenge
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Amen to your last 2 lines. A sad and well-written story.
I very much like this piece. It is subtle but has a big emotional impact.
06/16/08
Wow...excellent writing! Good use of dialogue and thoughts and descriptions. The last line was perfect, summing up the whole thing.
It makes you want to go give your dad a hug right now.
**THIS SPARKLES**