The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
Sad...very sad. I liked how she kept her promise though and attended the wedding despite what she had to face.
06/14/08
Ahh...so sad. This line really got me. "Are you going to leave me like my other mom?"
A little more dialogue and showing, instead of telling would make this even better.
Thank you for writing this.
This is very sad. How nice of her to attend the wedding, but was wondering how she had contact with Mindy those many years later to even be invited.