The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
What a journey! I was following the trail of emotions all the way through, I've never even been in an RV, but you made it very realistic, bringing it to life with the details. Nice job. ^_^
Your title is perfect. I enjoyed this "homey" piece and id'ed with your mc. Nice work.
06/06/08
A great story and very well done.