The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
Wow! What a neat story! I love the character of Lauren. It sort of reminds me of Mary and Martha in the kitchen sorr of thing. I'm glad that she found the family home and that they were able to share some special memories together! ^_^
You kept my attention from the first sentence. This is my favorite so far.
I liked the aura of nostalgia and the "rest of the story" that Lauren is busy passing on the blessing given her in this home.
Well deserved place. You teared me up a bit with the ending. Congratulations!
06/12/08
Congratulations on 3rd place! You've made an excellent point with your story - great job.
I love the conversation, the memories, and the ending especially. Wonderful writing! Congratulations!