The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely 'tribute'! I like how you had sweet, sour and spicy all together. What a mix and what a result! There was a soft, gentle feel to this as if I were listening to the memories being told firsthand. Nice job. ^_^
Great use of the sense of smell! I wanted to know more about what happens in this home. You give a hint of people who confide and learn to hope again. I want to be able to see and feel the people in this story as well. Thanks for sharing the beautiful smell of home!
A highly commeded for your first entry-mighty impressive!

Your story was wonderful and I like how your home - created you.

Can't wait to read more from you next quarter after the break.