The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
This is one of my favorites this week! I loved the journal excerpts and the way it fit in with memories from the past, I wished that the teenagers could've figured that all out, but someday, they'll learn. This was great! ^_^
06/07/08
Really like the journal entries - how people she sees bring back memories of her own home and how, at the end, she is motivated to go there again.
06/11/08
Great writing style, I really enjoyed this. Thanks so much for sharing, you won't be in beginners for long with these chops!
06/11/08
I like how you built this entry by entry and I liked the resolution at the end where she talks with the teens and reflects on her own life. Well done.
Your style reveals such a longing, too bad we all have to learn this lesson first hand.