The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
Wow!!! This is very poetical.
I was a little confused at the end...did the author get saved or go to heaven? (I think heaven, but earlier I thought it was the mother that died.)
I loved the recurring thoughts of love, warmth, and family.
Well done.
06/05/08
Life IS a cycle. You expressed it well.
06/12/08
This is an unusual take on the subject but interesting, nevertheless.