The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
Wonderful story with a good application!
I'm not sure it connects with the topic, but I love the way it all worked out in the end.
Good job, Keep writing.
06/10/08
I enjoyed reading your story. Funny, I was puzzled with why you all were trying to hide a pan lid's breakage from your father! When you made the application I thought that was excellent. Just as Adam and Eve were silly to try to hide their nakedness from their maker, so, too, are we when we attempt to cover our own mistakes...for our father already knows them. Good job.
You write well. This story was a real encouragement to me. Thank you for sharing.