The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/08
"her least desire is our greatest mission" . Great line. Sounds like a normal sibling relationship. Good job.
06/07/08
It sounds like you had a good childhood.
I would liked to hear some of your experiences together. The last line seemed to be tacked on. A little more explanation would have helped.
Good job. Keep writing.
06/07/08
It sounds like you had a good childhood.
I would liked to hear some of your experiences together. The last line seemed to be tacked on. A little more explanation would have helped.
Good job. Keep writing.