The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/08
Yes...it must have been a wonderful three months for Mary and Elizabeth.
Since most are familiar with this story, a little imaginative descriptions would have been a nice touch.
I like the verses interspersed throughout.
Keep writing.
Nice choice for the topic. Because this story is so well-known, I would have liked to have seen more of your interpretation of their personalities and voice. Good job. :)