The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/08
Beautiful! I like the way you transferred the thoughts of being close by blood, to being close through HIS blood.
Well done. Keep writing.
Well done. I like how you wove your own stories and thoughts with scriptural ones. You could strengthen this with a little less telling, and a little more showing. Very strong writing. Keep it up!