The Official Writing Challenge
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What an emotional packed piece of writing! If this is true, I really hope you gain complete reconciliation with your cousin and that you actually sent this letter... Well written.
05/29/08
Ohhh... what pain! You expressed your dreams, your joys, your sorrows, your loss so vividly. I could feel them.
Very creative, putting it into letter form. Excellent
**THIS SPARKLES**
Very heartfelt writing. Your descriptions of the two settings and character situations was real and clear in detail. Nice control of the highly emotional impact of this piece. :)