The Official Writing Challenge
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What an emotional packed piece of writing! If this is true, I really hope you gain complete reconciliation with your cousin and that you actually sent this letter... Well written.
Ohhh... what pain! You expressed your dreams, your joys, your sorrows, your loss so vividly. I could feel them.
Very creative, putting it into letter form. Excellent
Very heartfelt writing. Your descriptions of the two settings and character situations was real and clear in detail. Nice control of the highly emotional impact of this piece. :)