The Official Writing Challenge
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This was great! The opening was very good and it seems that Li found his cousin after all! A good ending! ^_^
This story, although sad in one way, is also filled with hope and promise. The opening paragraph was great. It grabbed my attention and drew me right into the story. Thankyou for sharing this with us.
Very intriguing story. I liked how the ending still kept you wondering. Thanks.
You did a terrific job intertwining the characters over time and space. Very nice. :)
I love your creativity with this story. Your ending is fun and heart-warming. Nice work on this.