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05/29/08
Indian culture-I Love it! This is definitely a fresh approach to the topic and I though I did like the story, I wanted more. More details, or to see if from Radha's POV. This was good though-I really enjoyed the story! ^_^
India is a beautiful Country and still has many quaint customs that are a blessing to some and a curse to others. You repeat "even among Christians" and this blessing was great. I think you could improve the picture with more description. Show us what happened in a picture. However I know your words are limited here. Keep writing you have tales to tell.
06/03/08
This is very interesting. I didn't know that there are still arranged marriages in India.
Your English is good.
Well done. Keep writing.
07/24/08
Thresia, the more of your writings I read, the more I feel I am getting to know you. I love to hear of your life in India. It gives a broader picture of how the other side of the world lives. My sister relates much, but her stories are more from the missionary point of view. I enjoy learning of the culture. This was a touching story, a story of romance of a less familiar kind. I am so glad that Radha finally married the boy of her childhood dreams, her cousin...Keep telling your stories, Theresa. You have a wealth of stories to tell of your culture....Helen