The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
There is some cute humor in here! A few spelling mistakes "plee" should be "plea" etc, but an interesting story! I liked the names too, and how they all wanted a haircut that stood straight up. That was great-and some loyalty there! ^_^ Nice job!
Very good story. There are several punctuation and spelling errors which do distract the reader from the enjoyment of this well thought out piece. Your characters and actions are very realistic. Nice job.
07/27/08
Great story. I had some of those hair cuts as a kid. Keep writing and developing.
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