The Official Writing Challenge
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Indeed it did work! I love this little glimpse into the lives of you and Nita. It was so real, with the little bits of here and there. I loved how the title fit in though-it made this a great read. Because it did work-even with 'reality'. Good job! ^_^
Really good writing- nice beginning and strong ending. Details were clear and well selected. Good job. :)