The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
This is great! I love the cousin angle here for Mary and Elizabeth-this is good! ^_^
Nice introspection of the relationship between these two well-known cousins. Good job. :)
I immediately thought of the cousin relationship of Elizabeth and Mary, as well. I really like how well you illustrated the narrative in the form of a dialogue. Enjoyed it!
06/03/08
Glad to be reading more Bible related stories at Challenge after so much of fiction. You've written well in injecting new POV and insights to the relationship between Mary and Elizabeth. Keep up the good work.