The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
This is very interesting! The 'flow' was interrupted a tad bit in the beginning, but I liked this new twist on "Cousin" good job! ^_^
Very unique and perceptive. Poetry fit your main idea well. Nice job. :)
06/04/08
Does He call us by our last name, and then put us in our place?
Our does He say “I Love You” and extends to all His grace?
...I like that! Very unique. It is hard to fit the rhythm in sometimes, but you did well to try. Practice makes perfect. And this piece was very original...Good for you...Helen