The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
This story is a bit confusing; however, you used it as a good object lesson, relating to God's grace. As a beginner, good for you. I am sure as you progress, you will do a bit more honing of your story. I know you are limited in your wordage, but a little more clarity would help. I felt disappointed that the kitty left. As the "mother" of more than one stray (or rescued cat), I cannot understand why a loved pet would leave home to go back to straying. Mine have all "gloried" in their spoiled status of becoming someone's pet...
05/22/08
Quite an object lesson here, I wanted to know a tad bit more. I felt sad that Fleur left the house though, normally cats hate to leave a home with food-and happy hands to pat their furry heads. ^_^ Great job! ^_^
Often people are lost just like stray cats but unfortunately they don't know it because they,ve never known anything else. At leas a cat seems to know to look for grace while many people reject it. I agree your story is a little confusing bu the idea is good. Keep writing. There are other little things as well but you have an inner insight.