The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Awww! The poor thing! You captured this very well, I felt for this dog who so badly just wanted a bit of love. Very well done. ^_^
05/25/08
Poor dog. I really felt for him. Makes me undestand my two dogs much beeter.
05/27/08
great perspective here. Very real emotions shown. Good work!
Great job with the Dog's POV. I am not a dog person, and I still felt sorry for this dog. I've never understood why people bother to get a pet and then leave it outside all the time.
Ah! poor Starlight! Very well done indeed.