The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/08
Oh, I loved this. Very good. I especially liked your ending. Very touching moment.
Laury
05/24/08
There's realistic and adventurous action in this story! Love the epic feel and the historical touches. Very sad ending, though. Poor puppy.
06/07/08
very nicely written. kept me on the edge of my seat.