The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Wonderful Poem!
You did a great job with choice of words, rhythm, and rhyme.
Well done.
05/24/08
Awww, this is cute and I'm so glad your wife puts you first. I love your last stanza. Good job:)
Laury
05/27/08
This is good. Thanks for putting a smile on my face.
- David