The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/08
A birthday cake can sometimes be a small thing...but here it became a big thing! Sounds delicious. Thanks so much for sharing!
05/16/08
What a "sweet" story, and mother-in-law! This is a very nice story to read and it's pleasing to hear about this special relationship.
05/19/08
Nice to have a mother-in-law you admire and wish to emulate. Thanks for giving us a peak into a fine relationship.
05/21/08
Nice story :) The dialogue was a little choppy, but the descriptive paragraphs at the end flowed much better. It was a simple statement made nicely.