The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
This is great! I love it even more to know that it's Moses's FIL here. The title and the flow of the verses are just right. My fave verse was the first one though. Good job! ^_^
I appreciated the POV you shared here - it is a creative idea to write from Jethro's perspective!
I would encourage you to watch your rhymes - some of them sound a little forced and artificial...
Keep up the good work!
Blessings,
Ben