The Official Writing Challenge
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ROFL! What a change of scenery. I liked how you showed us the contrast and in an easy(humor-filled) way. Very creative! ^_^
Well done. I really enjoyed this. Good details.
Great job contrasting these two mothers-in-law and perfect title. Nicely done. :)
Put's things into perspective. I loved "the spatulas are melting" line. Great natural dialogue. Thanks for the story!
Congratulation on your win. Loved it, great job of writing.
Congrats on placing 2nd.
Hee hee hee what a fun story. Frustration turns into gratitude when your MC realises she has it easy... just a dinner date. Wonderfully written and the dialogue perfect. I just loved: “Kath, I've got to go! She's in the kitchen and the spatulas are melting!" So funny. Well done on your 2nd Place. Up the ladder for you :-)
Haha! What a fun piece. I laughed at the ending. The dialogue in this was great. Congratulations on placing high this week! This story was well deserving of the honor. :)
Congratulations on your second place finish in beginners - you also were 38th overall. Great job!
Congratulations on your 2nd place. I enjoyed the realistic dialogue. Nice job with the topic.
Excellent story telling. Isn't perspective a wonderful thing? I really enjoyed the humor and dialogue. Congratulations!