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Awww! I'm so glad that she was able to 'get through' to her MIL and that the ending was just perfect! I love that they named the baby after his sister-wonderful job! ^_^

You rolled so many emotions into the word limit. I felt your MC's tripidation with her MIL.

Keep writing.
Lovely sentiment. Good writing style. Nice read. :)
Congratulations....beautiful story.
Congratulations, so glad to see a ribbon in this-well done.
Congratulation on your well deserved 1st place. Great job!
You almost had me to tears with this. So happy to see you place 1st and get to move up to intermediate. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. :)
You did a GREAT job! :-)
Congrats on your first place ribbon. Touching story.
There's nothing quite like a new grandchild to bring people together. Beautiful story Olivia, what a touching gesture to name the baby after the sister. Super congratulations on that lovely blue ribbon too :-)
Congratulations, Olivia! First place is wonderful - and you also came in 30th overall! Quite an accomplishment!
Congratulations on your 1st place. This is a very touching story. Nice job with the topic.
A great story told beautifully. The dialogue was well done. The pace of the story was good. Congratulations! Well deserved win.