The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Lots of descriptions and good images here. I wanted to know more and to see what else would happen, this seems like an interesting family. Good job. ^_^
Nice dialog between son and parents. My thoughts - it would have been nice to see a little of the interaction between the DIL and the parents. Nice writing. :)