The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/08
(Smile) Very well done! The dialogue kept it moving along. I wasn't sure who was the boy or girl at first, or whose house they were going to. I loved the interaction between the siters and the ending.
WEll done! **THIS SPARKLES**
05/13/08
You took me back a few years in this story! I have three daughters and dinners were known to have a few conversations running simultaneously. Anyone new to the table was lost in the dust.

Very cute story!
Such great dialogue--natural and uncontrived. Loved it! Could have had a scriptural tie-in though. Otherwise, great writing.
05/15/08
With five siblings (all girls) in the family, I could relate to this story. We did torture each others' boyfriends. Very creative and entertaining.
05/15/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. Nice job with the topic.