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05/08/08
Wonderful descriptions! You and your brother must have had a great childhood together.
This is full of great imagery.
**THIS SPARKLES**
Ah yes! What a time. Can't we turn it back, even for a day..........?

Even the part about throwing lunch together brings back so many memories.

Your tree/boat paragraph is outstanding.

Keep up the good words!
Great imaginations shown through great descriptions. :)
Great story of childhood memories. Your tone was beautifully conversational and easy to read.
I don't know if it was just my computer, but there were some very strange symbols appearing on the page: The Euro sign, Trade Mark symbol and others. The following is an example.
“Whatever, let’s go.” I replied.
If no one else can see it, I must be going crazy.
That aside, your story is woven beautifully and your shared memories are a delight. Well done.