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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: fathers (06/06/05)

TITLE: My Father's Occupation
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06/06/05


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Beautiful rays of color seemed to be Cascading down the mountainside.
I was amazed at how quickly the Microscopic molecules transformed into Droplets...
And then united as one tranquilizing Flow of water...
A pure,vibrant body of water.
The rush of adrenalin seemed to take over as the view hypnotized me.
Beauty so astounding,so...
Breathtaking could only be created by One so Powerful,Omnipresent,so Omnipotent...
The only explanation that rings true For eternity are the three names above All others:
Father,Son,And Holy Spirit.
My Father,His Son,And The Holy Spirit.
In my mind,I cannot even begin to Fathom the Glory of my Father.
But in my mind,there is one thing I am Sure of...
One day I,even I will understand and Experience the beuty of his holiness!
But for now,I can only imagine...
My Fathers occupation.


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Carol Shaffron06/13/05
Your expression of your perception of God's creation is as unique and glorious as the vivid image you paint in words. You could improve on it with some meditation, but first impressions are so full of the awe of the moment, and there is beauty in the spontaneous expression of you awe at Father's creation.
L.M. Lee06/14/05
very descriptive word pictures.
vicki mccollum06/16/05
Creative with lots of vivid imagery. Favorite sentence: "Beautiful rays of color cascading down the mountainside."
Shari Armstrong 06/18/05
Nice descriptions.