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05/08/08
so sad! If it wasn't for the title, this could have been about anyone that you are close to. A little more background or memories would have made it easier to relate to.
so sorry, praying for you and your family.
Keep writing.
05/09/08
How sad to watch a sister take such a wrong path. Thanks for sharing.
05/12/08
So very sad. We must continue to pray for our brothers and sisters who abuse drugs. Keep writing.
What an awesome and gripping prayer! I know it came from the heart. "Pry open her eyes" was perfectly worded. Sometimes we pray that God will open our eyes, but when we pray "pry open" it is stronger and shows more determination than to simply say "open our eyes". We, too, must pray that we can love with His love. Our love is just not sufficient enough. Continue praying, God is faithful. Scripture at the end topped off your article perfectly. Nicely done.