The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
Very good! I was hoping that Janie would change, but it seems like there is more to the story than what is just here. Great job, I liked the fact that her sister was always praying for her and that she was never really alone. ^_^
05/09/08
Your entry is a great reminder to keep praying for our loved ones who are walking away from God. Thank you!
05/12/08
Very good. I am gald that Janie came home. I know how it feels when love ones stray. My brother was in a similar situation. I thank God every day for returning him to his family.
Such a familiar story yet I like your take on it. It tugged at my heart strings. I've said that prayer myself over and over for my sisters and brothers to come home to the Lord. I loved that simple and so powerful a sentence: "She came home". It completed your message and encouraged me to continue praying for my loved ones. Very nicely done.
Jill I love your story, it made me cry, I love your heart for Janie. Good job mom