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05/08/08
What a lovely relationship for this brother and sister! I love how he saved his lunch money to buy a silver ring as a gift. So precious! You made this come alive so well and I really enjoyed the read from beginning to end. Excellent job! ^_^
A very nice tribute to a loving brother. Your genuine affection for him came through clearly. I found myself smiling as I read this article. His selfless act of buying you a beautiful gift showed his heart. How wonderful for you. Nicely written.