The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
Ohhh! So sad! This was a short glimpse into the relationship between two sisters, I felt sad to see the end of it come so quickly, but I did like the easy rhymes in the first two verses. Nice job. ^_^
This is sad. Saw a grammar error on the use of "hear" instead of "here", but otherwise, very heartfelt tribute.