The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
What a meeting! I want to know what they chose and how it worked out! This read like a short scene from a longer piece, like the story was just getting started. Great job with keeping this reader interested! ^_^
05/08/08
How many families could have a "meeting" just like this...it's so sad. I agree, I'd like to hear the rest of the story. This really touches so many hearts. Good job.
05/12/08
Very well written. I can relate to this very well, some of my family members are in a very similar situation, but there are no grandfathers left to try to make them come together.
You left me wondering what they were going to do and what was the rift...and wanting to see them reconcile.
05/15/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. I, too, want to know the rest of the story. :)

Nice job with the topic.