The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/08
What a meeting! I want to know what they chose and how it worked out! This read like a short scene from a longer piece, like the story was just getting started. Great job with keeping this reader interested! ^_^
05/08/08
How many families could have a "meeting" just like this...it's so sad. I agree, I'd like to hear the rest of the story. This really touches so many hearts. Good job.
05/12/08
Very well written. I can relate to this very well, some of my family members are in a very similar situation, but there are no grandfathers left to try to make them come together.
05/13/08
You left me wondering what they were going to do and what was the rift...and wanting to see them reconcile.
05/15/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. I, too, want to know the rest of the story. :)

Nice job with the topic.