The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some very good thoughts here. Well done but, perhaps you should finish the poem before adding the Bible quote at the end.
What a precious tribute! I liked how you showed the changes in roles, with one line for the mother and one for the daughter, alternating. It was good! ^_^
I was a bit confused, but I am sure it is due to my problem understanding poetry and not your writing. You have a talent that you need to keep working with.