The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story made me smile. I had an older brother who hit and called me names and I never really liked him until, in our old age, I told him how miserable he made my childhood. He was truly contrite; now we are the best of friends. Forgiveness is the way to go. Just as He forgave us when He gave up His life on the cross, we need to let go of the past.
05/08/08
Your title made me smile, and I was glad that the story had a happy ending. I loved the sarcastic tone though, it nailed this piece! ^_^
I would say that you were not too crazy about your brother and that there are not many fond memories. Sadly, I sense you have the same relationship with your little brother, that I have with mine. Keep up the writing.
I agree you were not too crazy about your brother, its never too late to make a change. I also think you should write more and try to be more elaborate in your style. You've got potential. Goodluck.