The Official Writing Challenge
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I could tell your heart was in this poem. I am sure most of us could if we tried squeeze a little more time out of our own pursuits for our Mamas. We know they forgive us but it is so much better if we have no such regrets.
05/03/08
A poem! You did a great job choosing some wonderful words to convey your thoughts.
The next to the last stanza is out of rhythm, but over all, you did a fairly good job with the rhyme and rhythm.
This is a good tribute to your mother. Well done.