The Official Writing Challenge
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What an involved and exuberant mom. I enjoyed reading your story very much. Up until a few years ago I didn't realize how many of the fairy tales actually contain elements of spiritual truth that can open a child's mind to the gospel. Hans Christian Anderson, if I remember correctly was a writer of the chritian faith.
05/03/08
Oh, this brings back some wonderful memories, both of my father telling me fairy tales and then when I told them to my children.
Good use of dialogue.
Well done, Keep writing.
05/07/08
Great job here! Good dialogue and I liked how you tied in your ending:))