The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
This is a very real life read nothing flowery. I enjoyed that approach.
06/13/05
Thank you for your vulnerability and honesty. I'm glad we share the same Father.
06/13/05
Very Honest & sincere, The poetry was an added surprise and could have been entered by itself.
Thank you
06/13/05
From your heart to the page...very nice!
06/14/05
great transition in your life as a believer
06/15/05
Interesting, hard hitting, first paragraph. The trials to your testimony - well done.
My heart broke for the little 5 year old crying for her "daddy," and I loved your second paragraph where you found your Father, God. Your entry is strongly written and unflinchingly truthful, very emotive. Lovely psalms of praise, too. Well done.
06/18/05
Not that I want to take anything away from Jesus, or God, but I wish that you could meet my father. Poppy would let you laugh and cry and he would hold you in his lap and let you talk to him until you were spent...and THEN he'd take you out for ice-cream...All this, even if you were 50 years old...

Your story touched me.

Pauly
06/18/05
Very nice piece.