The Official Writing Challenge
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First I must say your writing is very mature and skillful in this story. I felt the emotion of the daughter and the frustration of the mother in not being able to give hugs or respond. But I have to admit the end confused me. I read it over again and still wasn't sure if the mom died -you said she was in the presence of Jesus - and yet I thought they were at family counseling.

Good writing and it held my interest all through. Blessings.



05/03/08
Ahhh..this is so sad! Although some parts were hard to follow, it really showed the character of your mother.
I love hugs and give them freely to anyone.
Thank you for writing this.