The Official Writing Challenge
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First I must say your writing is very mature and skillful in this story. I felt the emotion of the daughter and the frustration of the mother in not being able to give hugs or respond. But I have to admit the end confused me. I read it over again and still wasn't sure if the mom died -you said she was in the presence of Jesus - and yet I thought they were at family counseling.

Good writing and it held my interest all through. Blessings.

Ahhh..this is so sad! Although some parts were hard to follow, it really showed the character of your mother.
I love hugs and give them freely to anyone.
Thank you for writing this.