The Official Writing Challenge
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A heartfelt message with lots of imagery. Peace.
05/03/08
I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing.
05/03/08
I like how you kept the nautical theme throughout the whole entry.
It will help the reader if you put a double space between your paragraphs.
What a beautiful tribute. Good job. Keep writing.
05/03/08
Well-done with the extended metaphor. You show so much aching tenderness in the images you use.