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I liked the simplicity and sweetness of this story. Perfect ending.
I liked the simplicity and sweetness of this story. Perfect ending.
05/03/08
what a beautiful story! This would be great for a sunday school paper story for children. It is a good example of the importance of showing love through actions. Well done. Keep writing.
I agree it would be a good story for a Sunday school paper. Simple and practical, it's still a good message for kids in a society where lots of them don't have money while their friends do.
You showed the deep emotions and tender heart of a child very well in this piece. Nice job. :)