The Official Writing Challenge
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Carrie certainly had a strenuous introduction into motherhood. I really wanted to know a bit more about what happened with the other baby. With the 750 word limit some details have to go in favor of a strong ending.

Your story has some very good elements and I enjoyed reading it.
05/03/08
Giving birth is such a wonderful experience. A little dialogue in this would make it flow better. This is so sweet. Keep writing.