The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/08
Wow! So emotionally well done! The short lines helped with the random thoughts as someone has in grief. The beginning and ending were great.
** THIS SPARKLES**
05/03/08
I especially liked the very last phrase: love you fiercely. So full of energy and grief at the same time.
05/07/08
Oh, the longing heart that misses mom is so evident in this poem. Very sad and touching.