The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
Wow, lots going on here! I think there needs to be much more to this story! I'm guessing it's a tad fantasy or sci-fi, right? Very interesting characters, I wanted to know more about them and what had led up to where they were and everything. Thanks for sharing, this is interesting! ^_^
Carol, your creativity blows me away! Where have all the fantasy-loving people been hiding this week? (Okay, so I am a late-comer, too.)
The diversity and descriptiveness of your entries is outstanding, and I can't wait to read more of your work.
While being dropped in to a complecx fantasy world can be dizzying, the mother's faith, sacrificial love, and defiance in support of life ring loud and clear. When is the novel coming out?
Utilizing a different genre to parallel these themes makes them fresh and compelling.
I kept thinking "when is the word limit going to kick in."

You kept drawing me into the drama. My heart raced as the truth came out.

I agree a novel would be appropriate. Your words ran riot and were inticing and invigorating.

Keep up the good words.