The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
Hmmm, very good! Quite a journey for both mother and daughter. I was tad bit confused as to who Ceila was, I didn't match her up until near the end. I wasn't sure how she'd ended up at the Aunt's house as well.

Otherwise, I'm glad that there was a happy ending and that they were able to mend some bridges and communicate to each other and eventually share the joy of motherhood.